THIS IS VERY GOOD
I enjoyed this very much, very good for your first flash. The only problem would be that the screen shakes way too much after each impact. Why don't you fix that for the collab?
You REALLY have really have to have to HAVE TO practice your animation skills.
This animation bored me alot. The text was a bad choice and the sound effects aren't so hot. Story was meh. Naruto does not want to KILL Sasuke, he just wants to prove he is better. I think you should really try studying or some thing, so your animations aren't eye hurting.
I gave this submission a 1
Thanks man....but you do have to take in consideration that i'm doing a different set of characters that didn't have a couple move set like street fighter and plus these sprites are kinda new and still need work...so I will probably do it over again and make it better
I didn't even know you could do something like that on flash dude, amazing!
God damn it man too short, and it looks like you rushed this one man.
The animatio and storyline was amazing. I'm korean too and the art style reminds me of how bad I want to go back to Korea. The Korean voice acting was amazing, I understodd everythin (duh). I'm waiting to see more from you. Don't forget to check my animations too!
Good for a first start
This is my review.
The sprites where good and some of them were customized =). Problem is that if you zoomed in a little more, then it would look alot better. Hitsparks, and hadokens were good.
I had no problem with any music or audio. I love Tekken so I love the music you put in there. The Sound FX were nice and very thrilling.
This is were most sprite animators suffer, like me. The story seemed rushed, and you know as well as I do that Ryu would never say faggot, and sure as hell never get beat up by Dudley, but Oh well it's your story.
Replay Value: 50/100
Not trying to be mean but...
Fighting was way too short and the story was a bit rushed. I'll watch it about 2 times max, but only the fighting scene.
Good animation, could have used more Camera effects. May not seem much, but good use of camera can boost your score up too. .20! Take note on what I said about zooming in. Make the Camera (With deafault size) 500x350. Some moves were way too slow. I know ur FPS is 30 but it really didn't show it. Speed up the moves, take some frames away.
Overall: 380/500 +50 (for first timers) = 430/500 86% B+
Very nice job. Just work on the camera and fighting and story and you got your self some good hardcore Proxy flash! I think you are good enough for my collab, just take note on what I said. PM me for the characters you want to do.
I worked more on the story than on the fight scene, but anyway,
it's my story.
Your rating is very professional, thanks very much!
I have a new review system, tell me if you like it.
Very detailed, you put alot of time putting in the waves and stuff for like the hadokens on the floor, which made it look very detailed. The Background was nice, and the movie felt very classic
It was original, no one used the music before, and the xiao xiao sound effects are actually decent.
The story was pretty basic, and it made it feel like the characters are alive and it made a very good story.
Replay Value: 90/100
You want to watch it again and be like, "Dude that's an awsome move! Gotta see that again!" It was very good and creative.
Smooth,smooth,smooth.... It was absolutely flawless, just add some few spices and you will be one of the best animators.
Total Score: 455/500 91% A- 4/5 9/10
No offense to Trixiayou or anything, but I have to say that your animation skills are just as good, or maybe even better than his. His is better because he put's in more camera angles, camera movements, shakes, and special effects. Put in some and you'll have an AMAZING MOVIE!
I have to say.....
Hey Khote, I took a review system from Rocket, and now I'll review like this, tell me if you like it.
Sprites are sprites (not saying I'm a sprite hater), but.... you put in alot of special effects Proxcide worthy. All the explosions looked beautiful and the stage was well designed.
Your menu was very detailed, it is suprised me very much!
I say this because the fight scene music is good. Obviously because it came from Tekken 5. But the music seemed to mellow compared to the intense action of the fighting. Your explosions were very loud, which made them look and sound a lot better, also the punches and kick sounds were excellent too.
The story was pretty good, and I like it in fact. It was very intresting, but the downside is, I think you rushed the storyline a little bit, and I didn't get it at first until I saw Kitana got killed. I'm guessing it took time in the MK vs SF series by Red-Lantern.
Replay Value: 90/100
Perfect, it makes you want to see it again, and again, and again. It would be better to put some easter eggs to make it more fun.
Total Score:455/500 = 91% A-
Should be 4/5, but it's your first and you worked your ass off on this, so 5/5
I really enjoyed this movie, and it reminded me of Tekken and it was very inspiring which made me get off my ass and start animating again. Check out for Angel Ryu VS. Evil Ryu coming out this Sunday (3/16/08)!
thanks man it means me a lot.
Even though I had seen this only 20 times, I see sexiness coming!
Have some stuff to say...
Hey Krinkels I'm not saying this is bad but, it's not as good good without Hank. I mean he got a badass costume in 7 and then he had to die. Well the movie is still badass, but a suggestion, make Jesus revive Hank like those other times. I was going to rate this a 9, but this was in my mind, " Wait not voting 10 for madness is a SIN!"
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